The Academic Conference (Day 1)

Sep 10, 2015 20:25
Today, I participated in the academic conference from this morning.

There were many technical presentations, and I couldn't understand well some of them.

However, there were also many interesting presentations, which elevated my motivation.

Also, people in Osaka were very friendly and kind.

In addition, I felt their Kansai accent were cool and cute.

I'd like to come to this city again someday.

Before thinking such a thing, I have to prepare for tomorrow's my presentation right now.
学会1日目

今日は朝から学会に参加してきました。

専門性の高い話が多く、しっかりと理解できないものもありました。

しかし面白い話も多く、とてもモチベーションが刺激されました。

また、大阪の人たちはとてもフレンドリーで、優しかったです。

そして関西弁がかっこよくて、かわいく感じました。

いつかまたこの町に来たいです。

そんなことを考えるよりも、今は明日の発表の準備をしなければなりません。
No. 1 デクラン's correction
  • Today, I participated in the academic conference from this morning.
  • Today, since this morning, I've been participating in the academic conference from this morning.
  • There were many technical presentations, and I couldn't understand well some of them.
  • There were many technical presentations, and I couldn't understand well some of them very well.
  • However, there were also many interesting presentations, which elevated my motivation.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
  • Also, people in Osaka were very friendly and kind.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
  • In addition, I felt their Kansai accent were cool and cute.
  • In addition, I felt their Kansai accents were cool and cute.
  • I'd like to come to this city again someday.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
  • Before thinking such a thing, I have to prepare for tomorrow's my presentation right now.
  • Before thinking such a thing, I have to prepare for my presentation tomorrow my presentation right now.
What's your presentation about tomorrow? Anything cool?
kanotown
Thank you very much for correcting my post! :D
My presentation is about a new reconstruction algorithm on X-ray CT. It's trivial, haha.
No. 2 outdoors's correction
  • In addition, I felt their Kansai accent were cool and cute.
  • In addition, I felt their Kansai accent were was cool and cute.
  • Before thinking such a thing, I have to prepare for tomorrow's my presentation right now.
  • Before thinking about that such a thing, I have to prepare for 's my presentation tomorrow right now.
kanotown
Thank you very much for your corrections again! :)
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